Ice on the Birdbath

An autumn haiga by Canadian poets Judi Suni Hall and Donald S. Hall at Gingezel. This haiga suffered from too much thought and analysis. We ended up with two quite different versions. You will have to decide which is best.

Ice on the Birdbath version 1autumn seasonal haiga by Judi Suni Hall and Don Hall at Gingezel

ice on the birdbath
shadows in his eyes ...
shivering

Haiga Judi and Don Hall
Photo Don hall


Ice on the Birdbath version 2 autumn seasonal haiga by Judi Suni Hall and Donals S Hall for Gingezel


sharp words
ice on the birdbath
... shadows

haiga Judi and Don Hall
photo Don